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Post by Kitmarch on Jul 12, 2006 18:07:42 GMT
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Post by Luke on Jul 13, 2006 16:25:00 GMT
Nice and symbolic, I suppose, though I do confess that squinting makes it easier to see what's happening. Oh, and you apparently forgot the blades on the back of her boots, but that's a minor thing, of course - and far better than I can do, since I can barely write by hand, let alone draw.
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Post by Kitmarch on Jul 13, 2006 17:50:37 GMT
you apparently forgot the blades on the back of her boots They're on the back.  Thanks for the comment anyway. When nobody says anything, it's just awful! |
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Post by Luke on Jul 13, 2006 22:46:18 GMT
True, but the angle of her feet would have them at least partially visible.
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Post by Kitmarch on Jul 13, 2006 23:14:20 GMT
I actually based the lower body on a screenie, and nope, they aren't.
Ah well, details, details... who the heck cares anyway?
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Post by Luke on Jul 13, 2006 23:16:59 GMT
What's with the head, by the way? Funny white patch on it, and unless I'm seeing the image wrong, it sank into the armour. Though as I said, I'm probably looking at it wrong, like an optical illusion.
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Post by Kitmarch on Jul 13, 2006 23:42:36 GMT
Her head is actually slumped forward, so you're mostly looking at the top of it..... I know, I can't draw hair.
The white patch is what is visable of the face from that angle. The slump explains the "sinking".
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Post by Shadowe on Jul 14, 2006 13:55:02 GMT
Ahh. In that case, the head is too small. Needs to be about 25% bigger. I was wondering what the midget head thing was about myself...
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Post by Kitmarch on Jul 14, 2006 16:41:04 GMT
*examines screenies *consults textbooks on comic art *throws the entire lot in the air I'd say it looks about right. CoX chars are typically around 8 heads hero standard, which makes heads look small. But you could very well be correct. I'm not an artist, and despite my posting junk, I make no claims to be one. Hey, why are we dissecting this anyway? It's a scribble, not a coursework submission!  |
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Post by Shanghai Blue on Jul 15, 2006 14:15:08 GMT
I think it looks ok, tbh.
Its a superhero ad these are drawn with exaggerated proportions. Generally, the body is 8 and 3/4 heads tall instead of the standard 6 1/2 heads.
Some comic book artists do draw heads slightly smaller than is normal to make the figure's body look somewhat taller and more imposing.
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Post by Kitmarch on Aug 21, 2006 20:37:06 GMT
Okay, trying again. Standard eight head hero proportions... I hope.  |
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Post by Luke on Aug 21, 2006 21:55:11 GMT
I like, although the head looks a little bit thin. Smile's cute though.
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Post by Kitmarch on Aug 21, 2006 23:04:12 GMT
Yeah, I think you're right there.
Bah! I'm sticking to comics.
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