How am I doing?

[Kitmarch]

Okay, blatent fishing for complements here.

My first plot in CoH, and I wouldn't mind a little feedback.



Oh, and many, many thanks to all who showed and gave such nice reactions to everything. *wipes eye*

[Akkarin]

I like it! I was literaly sitting at home desperately trying to work out what happened. Loved that lawyer too, I expect she's actualy the sinister mastermind behind it all.

Also, sorry I dissapeared later on, did I miss anything?

[Kitmarch]

admin said:

Also, sorry I dissapeared later on, did I miss anything?

Hmm... when did you vanish....?

Well, Alfred & Sam tried to locate Kit in the Zig, gave her a howling headache and managing to thoroughly annoy the psionic section of the security staff. Lawyer came back and had a nice long chat and had lots of people sign lots of forms, which, wonder of wonders they actually tried to read.

The summary so far is that if the FA can supply evidence of a second Kit (should be easy) then it will not be possible to convict the original. However, public opinion being what it is, "unable to prove beyond reasonable doubt" isn't going to do her hero career much good at all. It'd be very nice if more definate evidence of a conspiracy against her (and possibly the FA in general) could be uncovered.

However, finding that is up to you guys.....

[rogaldorn3]

Very, VERY good. All that time spent in the base after Kit's death was magnificent; very bleak.
Well done! I might advise you, however, to remember that plots can go the exact opposite direction to the one you expected. Be ready to adapt.
Still, an excellent plot so far.

[Kitmarch]

Thanks all. Plot pretty much done now anyways. Threw a few minor points in at the end which can be safely ignored by others.

[Luke]

Well, it's not quite done, it's just off in a different direction...

[Kitmarch]

Main arc of what I envisioned is sorted. Knockon will of course propergate onwards.

Okay, no more posts for me after bedtime.

[Luke]

Indeed, didn't they go to bed a little after midnight? Hence, you should have as well, considering that, unlike me, who is lazy, you have a job. Oh well. I'm ranting or something. Babbling, that's it.

[Kitmarch]

Tried, believe me. Failed. Damned heat.
So raided icebox and posted junk.
Wow. It's the day after and I'm doing the exact same thing!

Roll on Autumn!

[Luke]

Gah. It's late.

[Shanghai Blue]

I enjoyed it, the Lawyer was well played, and the police chief may well wind up being sued over various matters pertaining to his conduct by Shanghai Blue, who is still considering his options here.

In the end, if you run a plot and people have fun you succeeded, and speaking for myself, I had fun ;D.