Luke
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Falcon, Stars, and Starburst.
Posts: 167
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Post by Luke on Oct 27, 2006 0:04:09 GMT
 Pocket D hates me for having this specimen turn up and start pissing me off... |
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Post by stonegiant on Oct 27, 2006 5:49:55 GMT
Awww... such a cute story... LOL
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Post by Shadowe on Oct 27, 2006 7:28:59 GMT
An extremely well thought out and considered story. I see only two problems with it.
1) Spelling
2) There is no punctuation in the whole thing (except that full stop at the end)! I tried to read it aloud and ran out of breath on about the third line.
Poor Lukey.
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Post by Kitmarch on Oct 27, 2006 7:48:20 GMT
Owch. Brain sprain.
And either this person has lots of alts or it's avery common issue.
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Post by Shanghai Blue on Oct 27, 2006 15:59:37 GMT
Aww, isnt it pwecious, Alfie's got a little fwiend  But, joking apart, maybe you should try to encourage them, nurture their desire to roleplay, teach her/him about punctuation and become their guide in the world of rp. |
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Post by Kitmarch on Oct 29, 2006 18:29:46 GMT
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Post by Shanghai Blue on Oct 30, 2006 6:05:50 GMT
Harf the tyme it isnt there folt. They dont teech propper spelling and granma in skools theese dais.
Sorry, the devil made me do it, but it IS a valid point ;D
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Post by Kitmarch on Oct 30, 2006 8:16:54 GMT
Mebbe so, but there's a few in those that a simple proofread would catch, even at the level they seem to be working on.
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